Club promo movie

[matt]

If there was sound I could not hear it, so I cannot comment on that.

You have the word "more" twice in a row - you can see them both with freezing at 1:10 min. at bottom of screen

Yes, 1-3 quick pic.s for each of the events mentioned would be great!

Maybe you were trying to trim things down, but no mention of cruises, or camping ............. or tar....

But I think this is a lot better start than before (   2CENTS  ) as it gets the info across fast.

I like the begining with the eye, and the smoky S J V W C letters... be cool if they could look like they are coming out of the exhaust.

Instead of the perfect marriage, maybe the perfect fit, then showing two significant vw parts coming together ( crank to a case  or and engine going into a bug?

 Just my  2CENTS  .  Really good work though Jack!,  I like it already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Matt