Ok we we started the "what have you done for your VW" thread. I was thinking of starting something along those lines , but in Hiku form. Of corse it has to be Vw, repair, related, the count is 5,7,5
ok here is one to start it off....
Bus sits in driveway
Many moons pass my long gait
Will I ever move ?
Bug is in New Jersey
I feel like separated from her
She feels the same
6,9,4? a new hiku is born. busicon2
my red light is on
generators confuse me
it may be a ground
Ooops I just realized I had my numbers wrong... whoops!
Thought it was 5-7-5 c23
Blue Meanie sits on grass
My back burns as I strain lifting
plywood floor is more gooder (http://www.redlinetek.com/tco/forums/images/smilies/2/beatnik2.gif)
Previous owner
why have you forsaken me
over and over.
Close baha, it isn't a word count.
Quote from: Bahaha on October 04, 2009, 03:05:51 PM
Thought it was 5-7-5 c23
Crap. 5-7-5...That prevents me from using the 'PA Turnpike bathroom wall writing' scored poem, such as:
Here I sit all broken hearted
Couldn't get my VW started...
How 'bout:
Underneath the car
Brown flakes sprinkled in my eye
Safety glasses used to be for suckers
Just got her running
Winter closes in with bitter cold
Gas heaters go up in price
Baja bug in pieces
Parts strewn all about garage
I must get busy
Syllables not words
five seven five are needed
Rockdog will then bark
too much stuff in my head to remember that... At least I got the numbers right :icon_cheesygrin:
Haiku sylables
replaced in my memory
with 1-4-3-2
at least you spelled haiku right, and were closer than beet
Rockdog starts this thread
People keep it going on
Smiles made forever
Haiku Structure:
* 3 Lines
* Lines 1,2,3 have 5,7,5 syllables respectively.
* Unrhymed
Origins:
It is of Japanese origin. A Haiku is short poem of a keenly observed moment
that pertains to nature or human nature.
Example:
An old pond!
A frog jumps in?
the sound of water.
Basho
今は理解して
Pulled air cooled engine
Full of pride, show family
Milo says, again?
Majestic it is
The one most beautiful Brick
Will be on new tires
I had ribs left
over from dinner
last night 4 lunch
LAUGH@
Quote from: Beetleboi on October 05, 2009, 02:47:32 AM
I thought the Brick had decent tires. You found stock VW tires in white wall?
surfboard approaches
beware of taxi hijack
it happens again
Jack was here
hijack not
it will disappear
Quote from: rockdog2877 on October 05, 2009, 08:58:42 AM
surfboard approaches
beware of taxi hijack
it happens again
If taxi is lead
Degreaser will be needed
Airborn oil sticks
Crank crank crank crank crank
got to pump the gas a lot
boogers in fuel line?
Had the vote last night
The old guard is the new guard
The Earth spins normal
Quote from: Bahaha on October 06, 2009, 08:37:39 AM
Had the vote last night
The old guard is the new guard
The Earth spins normal
:icon_sunny:
No shame in no change
Nominees great and worthy
Group Strong like mountain
Shifts wonder on path
Coupling bushing need replace
Shifts must sync with trans
Sits in my driveway
wanting to be driven hard
need a hub to run
Researching Buses
I want one so bad it hurts
Time to start saving