Hiku for you.

[rockdog2877]

Ok we we started the "what have you done for your VW" thread. I was thinking of starting something along those lines , but in Hiku form. Of corse it has to be Vw, repair,  related, the count is 5,7,5
ok here is one to start it off....

Bus sits in driveway
Many moons pass my long gait
Will I ever move ?

 

[Beetleboi -Greg-]

Bug is in New Jersey
I feel like separated from her
She feels the same

[50split(paul)]

6,9,4? a new hiku is born. busicon2



my red light is on
generators confuse me
it may be a ground

[Beetleboi -Greg-]

Ooops I just realized I had my numbers wrong... whoops!

[Baha (Shawn)]

Thought it was 5-7-5  c23

Blue Meanie sits on grass
My back burns as I strain lifting
plywood floor is more gooder

[rockdog2877]

Previous owner
why have you forsaken me
over and over. 


Close baha, it isn't a word count.

[braidmeister]

Thought it was 5-7-5  c23

Crap. 5-7-5...That prevents me from using the 'PA Turnpike bathroom wall writing' scored poem, such as:

Here I sit all broken hearted
Couldn't get my VW started...

How 'bout:

Underneath the car
Brown flakes sprinkled in my eye
Safety glasses used to be for suckers

Just got her running
Winter closes in with bitter cold
Gas heaters go up in price

[Dagerm]

Baja bug in pieces
Parts strewn all about garage
I must get busy

[Dagerm]

Syllables not words
five seven five are needed
Rockdog will then bark

[Baha (Shawn)]

too much stuff in my head to remember that... At least I got the numbers right   :icon_cheesygrin:


Haiku sylables
replaced in my memory
with 1-4-3-2

[rockdog2877]

at least you spelled haiku right, and were closer than beet

[Baha (Shawn)]

Rockdog starts this thread
People keep it going on
Smiles made forever



Haiku Structure:
* 3 Lines
* Lines 1,2,3 have 5,7,5 syllables respectively.
* Unrhymed

Origins:
It is of Japanese origin. A Haiku is short poem of a keenly observed moment
that pertains to nature or human nature.

Example:

An old pond!
A frog jumps in?
the sound of water.

Basho



今は理解して

[rockdog2877]

Pulled air cooled engine
Full of pride, show family
Milo says, again?

[scarecrow]

Majestic it is
The one most beautiful Brick
Will be on new tires

[lovebus (jack)]

I had ribs left
over from dinner
last night 4 lunch