If there was sound I could not hear it, so I cannot comment on that.
You have the word "more" twice in a row - you can see them both with freezing at 1:10 min. at bottom of screen
Yes, 1-3 quick pic.s for each of the events mentioned would be great!
Maybe you were trying to trim things down, but no mention of cruises, or camping ............. or tar....
But I think this is a lot better start than before ( 2CENTS ) as it gets the info across fast.
I like the begining with the eye, and the smoky S J V W C letters... be cool if they could look like they are coming out of the exhaust.
Instead of the perfect marriage, maybe the perfect fit, then showing two significant vw parts coming together ( crank to a case or and engine going into a bug?
Just my 2CENTS . Really good work though Jack!, I like it already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Matt
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